5 minutes freewrite with prompt- ski resort

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img_0.9480280731090658.jpg Footsteps in the snow By @seckorama

"Season greetings to everyone in the house!"
"I hope you're having a wonderful evening!"
After saying all the possible positive greetings, Mary went straight to the point by asking them if they have seen her son, Jack before the evening. All of them looked at each other before replying with no clue to Jack's missing.
She ran out of the ski resort, went straight to the bay to ask if any of the bay watchers have seen him in any way.
On getting there, they looked at her, kept quiet while she walked straight to the head office.
While she was explaining to the Head of Department about her son, another person came in with the same missing child's case.
She finished her explanation, waited for a reply, but none was given to her on the spot.
The second woman who listened to her story told a similar story and both cases were paird and handed over to a police unit in the village.
Mary, whose mind is running randomly never wished to be consoled in any way. She called her mother and same story of Jack not at home was told.
She communicated with all her neighbors, family and friends and none proved to have seen Jack.
After two days, the police came back to her with a sad face, reporting that Jack has been killed and body disposed in the forest.
She ran straight to the crime scene to see her son's body but wasn't allowed to have a physical contact with the dead body nor was allowed to take a closer look at it.
While she was leaving the scene, she saw Magdalena, the lady that her son's case was paired with.
She ran to her, asking if she has found her son but Magdalena couldn't recognize her because she changed her hair style.
Mary became paranoid, followed Magdalena closely to the ski resort where she works, sat few meters away from her post.
While closely monitoring her and her phone calls, she overheard her telling the person on call about the successful kidnappe and the payout for the work done.
Ignorant Magdalena went inside the storehouse to get some food stuffs, leaving her phone on the table. Mary checked in asap, took the phone and went inside her car to checkout the content of the phone.
Lo and behold, Jack's picture was among the top ten pictures in her gallery.
Mary went straight to the police station, reported Magdalena and handed over the phone as evidence.
The police officers stormed the ski resort, broke into the store house and discovered the kids kept for sale in the internally market for body parts. Jack was also found alive.



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Cool. Thanks for using my LIL pics for your short stories, the pics they make sense 😁

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Yeah boss.
It's just what I needed for the completion of the story

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Wow, what a story. Thank God Jack was found alive. Great story buddy.

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Yeah, it's a nice fictional testimony.
Haahhaha.
Thanks for stopping by boss
!LOLZ

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