RE: S&S Invitational: Christmas Edition /Viaje de fin de año (Esp/Eng)
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Your story is so original and fascinating! An idyllic Christmas cruise starts beautifully and quickly turns into a scary pirate situation leading the passengers into time travel. That is an unexpected twist with some adventure.
I feel sorry for the protagonist's mother when she receives the letter. She can take comfort from knowing her daughter is safe in another world! A fine and well-written story. 😊
Thank you for participating in this Christmas Edition. Happy holidays. 🌲
!PIZZA
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Thank you very much @kemmyb.
I'm glad you liked my story. Portals in time are fascinating like the mysterious Bermuda triangle.
Best wishes for a Merry Christmas and a happy new year 2025. ✨️🎄