THE FALSE DOCTOR

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There was a man who fell in love with a lady in hospital and for him to make her fall in love with him, he started pretending as a doctor. He instantly moved his neck looking for an apron and also a stethoscope. In one way or the other, he was managed to get all his requirements.

The girl began approaching him, his heart began to beat faster. She did nothing and began walking without looking at him. He created an idea to make her consider him to get the reputation. So, the man started treating patients well, who was just sitting on the chairs to speak to the genuine doctor. Luckily for him, the girl saw him, came to him, and also made a friendship with the man on seeing his good attitude towards his possession.

Casually they were companions now and began the fundamental things that everybody does.

A day in the hospital

Girl:- which is the area you are specialized in?

Boy:- Pardon (Just to make her give more options)

Girl:- What I am trying to say is, are you a cardiologist/Gynecologist/Radiologist?

Boy:- I am a Gynecologist. (Said that but he did not know what Gynecologist mean)

On an unpleasant day, the girl's elder sister mistakenly fell from the stairs and she was 8 months pregnant. Her womb busted. She was instantly rushed to a hospital, where the guy works as a doctor. The girl was very sad and scared. She can to the hospital to see her elder sister. She immediately called the man who said he was a Gynecologist to look into her poor sister.

The man was scared and confused. He didn't know what to do. The man arrived at the hospital. On seeing him, the girl began to cry and asked him to save both her elder sister and the 8-month-old baby.

A senior doctor helps him to reach the operating room. There the man saw the baby's leg come out of the womb due to burst.

The senior doctor told “ It's impossible to save the baby if the baby (himself/herself) does not move the leg inside to mother's womb. The man with emotions chose to accept his nature to the girl.

He prayed a simple prayer and is the way to the operating centre he saw Dhoopam. He set down the Dhoopam near to the baby's feet and with his mouth breathing, he let the smoke move baby's feet.

To everybody's shock, the baby moved the leg back to normal (it's a miracle) and the Senior doctor thanked him.

The girl became a little bit happy and hugged him. Her father started thanking him for saving her elder daughter and the baby. Later the boy disclosed the real truth.

Instead of the girl having a bad impression of the boy, the girl truly started loving him. Her elder sister and the baby boy were almost in good condition. The man on the other side did not give up. He was determined to be a Gynecologist. He passed the medical examination and became the true Gynecologist. The girl and the boy eventually, got married.



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This story got my heart racing, @supo1. Nice work! Thanks for posting in The Ink Well.

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Be careful with this account Jayna. I can't prove with his other posts, at least not yet, but I caught him plagiarising his latest one and notified people in that community. The type of mistakes in that one and the ones I read of him are similar in nature. Also, if you remember Brandt, he found another post he plagiarised.

I can't be sure with the rest, but be careful with this individual.

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You've crafted a very good story here, and it has an excellent story arc. We fear for the child and the mother, with a fake gynecologist giving care at a critical time, when their lives are at stake, and then we are relieved when all is well.

A few tips for you:

  • Be sure to check over your story for words that may not have translated to English. For example, the word "Dhoopam" is not an English word, so English speaking readers will not understand that part of your story.
  • We have some excellent resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips for writers who are just starting out. In particular, please see the post Help for the Grammatically Challenged. It provides tips for using Google Docs to draft your posts. You can do this on a PC or a smart phone. Google Docs will point out errors in grammar and wording choice, which you can then fix by clicking on them.

Thank you for engaging with other writers in the community by reading and commenting on their posts! Keep writing!

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