Suicide || Zapficmonday contest with prompt "Waiting"

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Poor Maria

Maria sat hopelessly on the ground

She was soaked in a pool of her blood

Life has become so meaningless

She laid down flat, waiting for death to take her.

Slowly her eyes began to close

She smiled as death finally showed. She gave up the ghost

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Jeez. This is a pretty short and graphic stuff. I'd love to know more. Why is she laying in the pool of get blood, who put her there, could she have done anything or is there any help? I need a sequel

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She slit her wrist with a blade 😔😪 It was suicide.

Thank you for stopping by @piratethanos

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Oh wow. That's sad. I'd love for you to write more

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Thanks. I would write more

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O My! Another lovely post, I enjoyed reading it, short and satisfactory🤗💗

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I appreciate you Starr. I'm glad you loved it

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Short but impactful.

I’ve thought a lot about death and the finality of last of those last moments of life and the truth is no matter how expectant you are, you can never truly be ready for death.

Hold on a bit, I might be wrong here too cuz people commmit suicide and some are seriously sick for long periods of time without improvements so it is logical that someone would be eager to leave this world in a condition like that.

For me though I want what most people want, death in my sleep without any serious pain.

The pain I would fear the most on my dying bed is that of mistakes and regrets.

No be say to die de hungry me o😕

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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 this part got me cracked up

No be say to die de hungry me o

Remember this old Nigeria song that has this line

Nobody wan die but they wan go heaven

Well you may be right when you said "you can never truly be ready for death" especially when life flashes before your eyes, all the good times, beautiful memories and all.

Thanks for your beautiful comment.

Hope to see you more often. Let's connect.

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