Bruised - My First Freewrite #freewritehouse #zapfic

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Down, down he goes.

Another shuddering blow, it's all he knows.

Exasperated, flattened on the canvas.

Disorientated, questioning how much it matters.

But he's been here before, bruised but never broken.

Gets to his feet resurrected, a beast awoken.

Adversity fuels his fire, he's the champion they love and admire.

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Wow is it really your first freewrite? That's pretty big then buddy. Zapfic50friday ain't a bad way to start the freewrite journey ey?..

But he's been here before, bruised but never broken.

I found for myself that these were the best lines of your story...

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Hey thanks mate. Yeah stumbled across the Zapfic50friday and thought it looked like a bit of fun.

50 words is like learning to swim in the shallow end, rather than jumping straight in the deep end I feel.

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That. Is. Fucking. Brilliant! !LOL
Well done, Liam. Well done.
I wish to encourage the writer in you 😉

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