LONELY
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When you laugh the world laughs with you,
But when you cry, you cry alone,
For the world must borrow it's own gaiety,
Cause it has its own troubles and they're enough.
The hills whisper's in respond when you sing,
For the early is lost on the air
The echoes gave a joyful sound,
But it faded away.
Celebrate and men shall follow you,
Mourn and men flews away,
All they want is to partake in your pleasure,
They're not interested in your sorrow.
Be happy and your friends multiples,
Grieve and you lose them all,
There's none to reject your Sweet wine,
But alone you shall drink life's brazen.
Merriment, and the hall will be full,
Starve and they all vanish into tin air,
Make it and give, and you will live,
Cause no man can help you die.
In the halls of pleasure, there's enough room,
For a royal training,
But we all must file on one by one,
Through the narrow path of pain.
When friends are all gone,
And I'm left alone all by myself,
I shallow in my grief.
When all this pleasures are gone,
Life became so clear to me,
Reviewing the new version of myself.
Suicide became my next arrangement,
But I thought of my friends,
Will they ever mourn for me?
Will I be remembered?
Will flowers be laid on my grave?
These are the thought that kept on hunting me.
I'm lonely, all alone in this world.
Nicely expressed. Very well ornamented. Of course,your observation is laudable.
By the way Jessy―lonely or alone?
Thanks for your nice comment
Well, lonely, alone or even forgotten are suitable for my poem😊
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