I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE MINE
It was a glorious glowing day
The earth seems to be at peace, the sun shine so bright and I was so excited for nothing at all.. I walk down the road heading to get myself a drink at McDonald's freshing store, a section in Everyday Shopping Mall..
"Good morning Mrs Hills"
Please can I have my favorite?
Here you go Jessica!!
Hmmmm!!! strawberry banana drink is my number 1 brand..
Walking out the mall with a handful of my note books and the other holding my drink, I had to hurry up before the community bus leaves me behind. Boom!!! I just knock someone.
"I'm so sorry sir," I said while Rush for my books on the floor.
Here! The calm voice of the guy I popped into made me stood up to take some of my books he help picked up. That was when I realized that my strawberry banana juice has stained the whole of his front shirt...
Ooooohhh no!!!!! I rushed for my handkerchief to wipe it out and he held my hand and said
" That's okay young lady"
"Thank you sir" I kept on saying that as i walked out heading to the road.
Today's class was the usual, all busy throughout cause it was my final year in school, we got dismissed and I was heading out for the bus when I saw the stranger again and I immediately hide my face out of shame trying to walk pass him, but I heard him called out
"Hey, you school here?" he said, and I nodded
"Well I'm Jimmy, and you"?
"I'm Jessica" I replied calmly
We discussed a little and later exchang contact
That was how I got to know more about Jimmy and we got along. We were so close that you can actually see us together everyday.
Jimmy and I love going to the same spot to get drinks, and trust me I don't like coffee. But that particular day Jimmy insist I take coffee with him which I did
We walked out together and it was about to rain, just drizzling though and I brought out my umbrella but he wasn't under it with me, maybe he was shy I thought. I had to drag me closer to share the umbrella with me.
It was later sunny again and we stopped at a place to sit and he asked me what I like
I held my coffee cup so tight, in my heart I want to say "You" but I didn't answer the question
And he said "Well for me, I like.........You"
I was so excited and hug him so passionately..
I was overwhelmed and Happy, and I said to him
"I can believe you're mine"
Sounds like a true story. Keep writing and reading. I believe your writing will improve as well.
Thanks for the comment dear
This is a sweet love story. You have a nice conversational style, breezy. We like this character, because she seems a little bit shy and she certainly is polite. She is mortified that she has spoiled the young man's (Jimmy's) shirt. The romance seems to progress very quickly, but with people so young, that seems understandable.
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Thanks alot..
Definitely I will do so