The nearby enemy / El enemigo cercano - The Ink Well Prompt #102

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This is my entry for The Ink Well Prompt #102: Sympathy

It was past midnight when insistent knocking sounded over the large mahogany door, echoing throughout the mansion. The knocking continued steadily, irritating the owner of the property.

"What on earth?" wondered the Count at the obstinate hammering.

"Henry!" he shouted angrily.

Receiving no answer and in the face of repeated bombardments towards the door, he decided to get up and attend to the emergency himself.

"Where the hell is Henry, who hasn't taken care of the wretch who dares disturb my peace?" he cursed a couple of times as he descended the grand central staircase leading to the entrance of his mansion.

The volume of the knocking increased as he approached, lessening his patience.

He opened the heavy door with a bang and gaped at what was behind it.

A woman, her clothes in tatters, staggered about trying to keep her balance; startled she restrained herself before lunging at the large door again.

"You're in trouble," the woman pointed her finger toward the Count. Her blank stare and liquor breath made the Count's face crumple with contempt.

"I've come to finish you off once and for all," after her threat, she fell flat on her face in front of the entrance.

A young man hurried to the Count's side, his legs trembling, but his eyes wide open, they swept the scene from side to side, looked at the Count and back at the woman on the floor; her clothes in tatters, bruises and scratches all over her body and her matted hair covered her face in its entirety.

"It... Sir," he hesitated as he looked at the Count's hardened face.

"It's..."

"It's Ava!"

"How was it possible for you to defeat her?"

"Is she dead?" the servant asked dumbfounded, not waiting for an answer.

"Don't be an idiot, Henry. She's invulnerable and indestructible. She's just...", he paused and wrinkled his face even more as he completed the sentence, "...drunk."

Henry was petrified at the scene, still wondering what a superheroine was doing at the mansion's entrance, in such a deplorable state.

"Take her to the guest room and treat her wounds. Make sure she is fitted with clothing worthy of her status."

Henry stammered for a moment, and finally, the words came out of his mouth

"Yes, sir."

He ran for help inside the mansion leaving the Count with his thoughts and face even more hardened.

...

Ava's face contracted at the heat and intensity of the sun's rays streaming through the gothic window. She covered her eyes with her hands and a pounding headache brought her back to her senses.

Where the hell was she, she wondered. She could hardly remember what had happened. She was lying on a bed as soft and cozy as cotton candy, wearing green pajamas with blue plaid stripes; the room was sweetly decorated and framed with pastel-colored walls; to one side on an exquisite ivory-colored dresser was a silver tray with a glass of orange juice, toast with freshly made eggs still steaming next to a cup of hot coffee, and on a small plate was a couple of pills.

Behind a thick pane of glass sat the Count comfortably in an antique armchair. He sipped a cup of tea, a habit he enjoyed as a child.

"It's aspirin," mused the Count without taking his eyes off his teacup.

The girl was rubbing her forehead to soothe the hangover.

"You are totally at my mercy, this room is reinforced with titanium walls, thick enough to contain you. Imagine my surprise, to be able to capture you effortlessly. Without you, the other superheroes will be no match for my wicked plans."

"You're wrong if you think I'm alone, soon enough the Justiciars will come for me and give you what you deserve," she replied angrily.

"I doubt it, if they had, they would have arrived by now. You've been laying in that bed for over 12 hours. And from the way you arrived, I assume your companions abhor your behavior and your company."

Ava lowered her gaze.

"I've been watching you for a long time now. You've changed. You've stopped being the competent superhero everyone knows. You make a lot of mistakes, and destroy buildings as well property without measuring the consequences."

Ava gritted her teeth and averted her gaze out the window, soon enough the Count's chatter became imperceptible. She was tired of doing the job of a superheroine. The constant call of duty and the repeated requests for help from the citizens were becoming monotonous; it had been many years since she had had time to herself, and she had never had a day off since she had become what she was today... A superheroine.

The Count kept talking about how careless she had become and the plans he had to wipe out the vigilante society. Concentrating on his malevolent plans and thrilled to have in his power none other than the great Ava, it took him a while to realize that his guest had fallen completely asleep... Again.

Curled up on her body, wrapped in a ball she began to snore; she rested her head tenderly on the feather pillow and her childish gesture of sucking her thumb, while sleeping, made Conde's face soften.

Ava was not quite an adult, barely turning 21.

So the days passed as she recovered from her injuries, with the premise of being locked in a totally airtight room she decided to take some time to rest. In the evenings, she began to appreciate the conversations with the Count during the dinners.

Both she and the Count began to appreciate each other's company, to such a degree that he put aside his evil plans to spend more time with Ava.

One night, the Count lowered his walls and confessed something that Ava would never have imagined. His former life was never what it was today, during his youth he had been the victim of mistreatment by his classmates at boarding school, to such a degree that he had old scars from burns and wounds inflicted on him by his perpetrators. They made fun of how obese he was and how slow he used to be to understand classes.

Many times he took his complaints to the student counselors; however, coming from a class of limited means they constantly doubted his word. His parents, tired of his incessant problems, decided to give him up for adoption. To his misfortune, the pattern kept repeating itself during his stay at the orphanage.

"I often came to think of ending my own life," Ava was totally dumbfounded to hear this.

"But my desire for revenge overcame my pathetic self-pity for myself and drove me to amass the knowledge and fortune necessary to become the towering man I had become."

Both were silent.

Belatedly later, Ava revealed her innermost thoughts.

"I always believed in taking down enemies in one fell swoop, regardless of the reasons that led them to that life. I never put myself in my antagonist's shoes, it never even crossed my mind to think there was a reason for the way they were."

She sighed.

"I guess it was easier to smash up their asses than to stop and think about what drove them to such actions."

Ava was beginning to see that things were not as they appeared and that through understanding, patience, and tolerance she could understand that villains were also victims of oppression and injustice.

In the morning, to Ava's surprise, her superhero costume was fully repaired and sweetly folded on the dresser beside her bed. The thick glass shield was gone.

After putting on the costume, she heard a tapping on the bedroom door.

"Come in," Ava answered. This time it was Henry bringing breakfast.

The servant bowed and said.

"By order of the Count, you are free to leave at your leisure."

Ava stretched her arms to wake up and inadvertently drove her fist through the titanium-reinforced wall without much effort.

"Oops, how I am sorry... My apologies to the Count" she expressed in a childish tone with a hand on her chest as she winked.

Henry swallowed hard and vanished out the door immediately.

Ava returned home and was greeted like a heroine. Her friends and teammates were thrilled to see her back and sorry for leaving her alone, she apologized to everyone for her behavior months earlier.

Inside Ava felt different. She had seen a side of the Count that she never expected to see, and she couldn't help but feel a little sympathy for him. Ava realized that she had learned an important lesson about life and justice.

See you next time...




Esta es mi entrada para The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #102: Simpatía

Pasaban de las 12 de la noche cuando golpes insistentes retumbaron sobre la gran puerta de caoba, haciendo eco en toda mansion. Los golpes seguían constantes, irritando al dueño de la propiedad.

“¿Qué demonios?”, se preguntó el Conde ante los obstinantes martilleos

“!Henry¡”, gritó enfurecido.

Al no recibir respuesta y ante los reiterados bombardeos hacia la puerta, decidió levantarse y atender la emergencia por sí mismo.

“¿Dónde diablos estará Henry, que no se ha encargado del infeliz que osa perturbar mi paz?”, maldijo un par de veces mientras bajaba la gran escalera central que conducía a la entrada de su mansión.

El volumen de los golpes se incrementaban conforme se acercaba, disminuyendo su paciencia.

Abrió de golpe la pesada puerta y quedó boquiabierto ante lo que había tras de ella

Una mujer con su ropa hecha jirones, tambaleaba tratando de mantener el equilibro; sorprendida se contuvo antes de volver a arremeter contra la gran puerta.

“Estás en problemas”, señaló la mujer con el dedo hacia el Conde. Su mirada perdida y su aliento a licor hizo que la cara del Conde se arrugara con desprecio.

“Vengo a acabar contigo de una vez por todas”, después de su amenaza, cayó de bruces frente a la entrada.

Un joven se escurrió a un lado del Conde, sus piernas temblaban, pero sus ojos abiertos de par en par, recorrían la escena de un lado al otro, miraban al Conde y volvían a mirar a la mujer en el suelo; su ropa hecha harapos, magulladuras y rasguños por todo su cuerpo y su cabello enmarañado cubría el rostro en su totalidad.

“Se… Señor”, titubeó al mirar el rostro endurecido del Conde

“Es…”,

“!Es Ava¡”

“¿Como ha sido posible que la derrotara?”

“¿Está muerta?”, preguntó anonadado el sirviente sin esperar respuesta

“No seas idiota, Henry. Ella es invulnerable e indestructible. Solo está...”, hizo una pausa y arrugó aún más su rostro al completar la frase, ”...ebria”

Henry petrificado ante la escena, seguía preguntándose qué hacía una superheroína en la entrada de la mansión, en ese estado tan deplorable.

“Llévala al cuarto de huéspedes y trata sus heridas. Asegurate que le pongan una indumentaria digna de su status”

Henry tartamudeó por un instante y finalmente salieron las palabras de su boca

“Sí, señor”

Corrió a buscar ayuda dentro de la mansión dejando al Conde con sus pensamientos y su rostro aún más endurecido.

La cara de Ava se contrajo ante el calor y la intensidad de los rayos de sol que atravesaban el ventanal gótico. Cubrió sus ojos con sus manos y un fuerte dolor de cabeza le hizo volver en sí.

Dónde demonios se encontraba,se preguntó. Apenas recordaba lo sucedido. Estaba tendida sobre una cama tan suave y acogedora como algodón de azúcar, llevaba una pijama verde con franjas azules a cuadros; la habitación estaba dulcemente decorada enmarcada con paredes color pastel, a un lado sobre una cómoda exquisita color marfil, había una bandeja de plata con un vaso de jugo de naranja, unas tostadas con huevos recién hechos, aún humeaban junto a una taza de café caliente y en un pequeño plato había un par pastillas.

Tras un grueso cristal estaba sentado cómodamente el Conde sobre un sillón antiguo. Sorbía una taza de té, un hábito que disfrutaba de pequeño.

“Son aspirinas”, musitó el Conde sin quitar la vista de su taza de té.

La chica sobaba su frente para calmar la resaca.

“Te encuentras totalmente a mi merced, esta habitación está reforzada con paredes de titanio, lo suficientemente gruesas para contenerte. Imagina mi sorpresa, poder capturarte sin esfuerzo. Sin tí, los otros superhéroes no serán rivales para mis perversos planes.”

“Te equivocas si piensas que estoy sola, muy pronto los Justicieros vendrán por mí y te darán tu merecido”, respondió enojada.

“Lo dudo, si así fuera ya habrían llegado. Llevas más de 12 horas postrada en esa cama. Y por la forma en que llegaste, asumo que tus compañeros aborrecen tu comportamiento y tu compañía.”

Ava bajó su mirada.

“Te he estado observando desde hace mucho tiempo. Has cambiado. Has dejado de ser la superheroína competente que todos conocen. Cometes muchos errores, destruyes edificios y propiedades sin medir las consecuencias”

Ava apretó los dientes y desvió la mirada hacia el exterior del ventanal, muy pronto la charla del Conde se hizo imperceptible. Estaba cansada de hacer el trabajo de superheroína. El constante llamado del deber, las reiteradas solicitudes de ayuda de los ciudadanos se hacían monótonas; hacía muchos años que no tenía un tiempo para ella, jamás había tenido un día de descanso desde que se había convertido en lo que era hoy en día… Una superheroína.

El Conde seguía hablando de lo descuidada que se había convertido ella y de los planes que tenía para acabar con la sociedad de los Justicieros. Concentrado en sus malévolos planes y emocionado por tener en su poder a nada más y nada menos que a la gran Ava, tardó en darse cuenta que su huésped se había quedado totalmente dormida… Nuevamente.

Enrollada sobre su cuerpo, hecha un ovillo comenzó a roncar; reposaba tiernamente su cabeza sobre la almohada de plumas y su gesto infantil de chupar el dedo, mientras dormía, hizo que el rostro de Conde se ablandara.

Ava no era del todo un adulto, apenas cumplía 21 años.

Así pasaron los días mientras se recuperaba de sus heridas, con la premisa de estar encerrada en una habitación totalmente hermética decidió tomarse un tiempo para descansar. Por las tardes, comenzó a apreciar las conversaciones con el Conde durante las cenas.

Tanto ella como el Conde comenzaron a apreciar sus compañías, a tal grado que dejaba a un lado sus malévolos planes para pasar más tiempo con Ava.

Una noche, el Conde bajó sus murallas y confesó algo que Ava nunca habría imaginado. Su vida anterior jamás fue lo que era hoy en día, durante su juventud había sido víctima de maltrato por parte de sus compañeros en el internado, a tal grado que tenía viejas cicatrices de quemaduras y heridas que le propinaron sus perpetradores. Se burlaban de lo obeso que era y de lo lento que solia ser para entender las clases.

Muchas veces llevó sus quejas ante los consejeros estudiantiles; sin embargo, al provenir de una clase de escasos recursos constantemente dudaban de su palabra. Sus padres cansados de sus incesantes problemas decidieron darlo en adopción. Para su infortunio, el patrón siguió repitiendo durante su estancia en el orfanatorio.

“A menudo llegué a pensar en acabar con mi propia vida”, Ava quedó totalmente boquiabierta al escuchar esto.

“Pero mi deseo de venganza sobrepasó mi patética autocompasión por mí mismo y me impulsó a amasar el conocimiento y la fortuna necesaria para llegar a ser el hombre imponente que había llegado a ser”

Ambos quedaron en silencio.

Tarde después, Ava reveló sus pensamientos más íntimos.

“Siempre creí que debía acabar con los enemigos de un solo golpe, sin importar las razones que lo condujeron a esa vida. Jamás me puse en los zapatos de mi antagonista, ni siquiera pasó por mi mente pensar que había una razón para ser como era”

Suspiró.

“Supongo que era más sencillo partirles las madres que detenerme a pensar qué lo impulsaba a realizar tales acciones”

Ava comenzaba a ver que las cosas no eran como aparentaban y que a través de la comprensión, paciencia y la tolerancia podría entender que los villanos también eran víctimas de la opresión y las injusticias.

En la mañana, para sorpresa de Ava, su traje de superhéroe estaba totalmente reparado y dulcemente doblado sobre la cómoda a un lado de su cama. El grueso escudo de cristal había desaparecido.

Tras colocarse el traje, escuchó unos golpecitos en la puerta de la habitación.

“Adelante”, contestó Ava. Esta vez era Henry quien traía el desayuno.

El sirviente hizo una reverencia y dijo

“Por orden del Conde, es libre de irse cuando le plazca”

Ava estiró sus brazos para desperezarse y sin querer atravesó la pared reforzada de titaneo con su puño sin mucho esfuerzo.

“!Uy¡ Cómo lo lamento… Mis disculpas al Conde” expresó con un tono infantil con una mano sobre su pecho mientras guiñaba un ojo.

Henry tragó fuerte y se esfumó por la puerta inmediatamente

Ava regresó a su hogar y fue recibida como una heroína. Sus amigos y compañeros de equipo estaban emocionados de verla de vuelta y apenados por haberla dejado sola, ella se disculpó ante todos por el comportamiento que había tenido meses atras.

En su interior Ava se sentía diferente. Ella ha visto un lado del Conde que nunca esperó ver, y no pudo evitar sentir un poco de compasión por él. Ava se dio cuenta de que había aprendido una importante lección sobre la vida y la justicia.

Hasta la próxima.



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You build a tale of surprising sympathies that is positively delightful! From the introduction you throw worn tropes to the wind, allowing whatever assumptions we have about heroes vs. villains to become rumor. Here, our hero leans into the human portion of super-human, learning a lesson from an unexpected source! Very clever. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

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I really enjoy writing these stories. Your feedback really help me to improve my storytelling and my writing. Thanks

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I loved this story!! You dove right in from the first lines, building an amusing and thought-provoking tale! The plot is well established, with fantastic descriptions throughout! Thank you for this awesome read, which makes us question just who is who 😉 😁 !PIZZA !LUV

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Thanks for coming by. I am very pleased with your comment 😃🙏

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