A REMARKABLE ONE PART 3

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What do we do mother?
we can't go back home neither can we go make a report at the police station

This is becoming wild mother, have seen cases like this in movies, and the victims end up dead
Maybe we go back home to return the remaining one we have with us.

The son could not get hold of himself anymore as the fear of getting caught made him unstable and frightening

His mother was still contemplating what to do when the father cut in with a loud cough and shock from his sleep.

She had no idea what could have made him cough that loud or caused the shock, she was not ready to know because that was the job of the doctor, without hesitation, she rushed outside to call for a doctor.

The doctor came in with a nurse to have a check-up on him both the wife and son were asked to excuse them so that they could do their job.

Outside at the entrance of the door, both son and mother were not in a stable state they have a problem back home with no idea of who wanted them or how he looks and out here worried about the sick one.

They are stuck here in the hospital with nothing to do or what to do

It has been over twenty minutes and still, the doctor is not out, what could be holding him back there?

The mother tried to ask the other nurse going in and out to get the necessary need for the doctor but then all the nurse would tell was for her to hold on for the doctor.

This is becoming unbearable and frustrating but what can she do but sit patiently and wait for the doctor?

The nurses eventually came out with the doctor but this time with sad face and expressions.

The atmosphere became tense and silent, the doctor moved closer to the mother and went ahead to break the news to her

Her husband is dead, she was dumbfounded for about 60 seconds her world has just crumbled hot tears running down her cheek with support from the nurses she was accompanied to a sit.
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She held her son tight, both of them having tears running down their cheeks. it was a sad moment for the family.

But no matter how emotional they can be they need to get themselves together, troubles still await them at home.

They made arrangements of how the husband would be buried right there at the hospital because fear of going home and getting caught by the unknown won't let them leave the hospital.

The money can't be returned anymore it has been tampered with to pay the hospital bills, moreover they have no idea what they would come across if they try returning it

Then they both concluded to leave and start a new life elsewhere with the money left with them.

They left with the money to start a new life and it became a new story for both of them.

Sometimes we take mistakes for miracles and it comes with repercussions

sometimes it gets bad beyond repair and sometimes we get a second chance to make it right like it happened here in this story

You can read Part oneand part 2 here

So this week I tried full tour around my bingo card but couldn't, time sometimes can be very fast but I did visit some and it was a nice tour reading their stories

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Good to see your fictional writing ends with a lesson, am missing some out here am going back to the first part to get it all

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Thanks man I really appreciate your kind words....

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I really loved how you ended your story.

It was a long 3 weeks of writing and reading but it was so worth it to read stories like yours!

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Thank you for you kind words
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Oh no!...I had that feelings that she was going to lose her husband...well to me it's a way to get them free from being slowdown...because if those people who has the money eventually finds out they would be in a run leaving here husband in the hospital....

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Yeah I guess it easy that way
Thank you for dropping by.

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Sad to end with the loss of a husband and father, but it seems thankful that they have the means to start a new life with only the two of them to count on each other... and a bag full of money! Well done on producing a fiction trilogy series 🙌 Fabulous effort... and what a great challenge, hey? !ALIVE !PIZZA

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