Claudia's Alternate Worlds - Chapter 1 [ENG/ESP]
Los Mundos Alternos de Claudia - Capitulo 1
Una verde pradera se muestra en toda su extensión, cubierta de una fina y muy hermosa alfombra de hierba y grama que, al parecer, se cuida a sí misma. Esto, debido a que su forma y belleza dan la impresión de que ha sido podada recientemente o, que de algún modo, ha crecido hasta el punto ideal en donde todas parecen estar a la misma altura, la exacta y justa para que ninguna sobresalga o quede debajo de otra y cada una en su sitio idóneo, lo que genera un conjunto armonioso de naturaleza en perfecta sincronía. Mirando alrededor y a la distancia, solo se notan suaves y delicadas colinas que suben y bajan, todas perfectas y todas verdes. Arriba, un hermoso cielo azul, surcado por suaves nubes blancas que sirven de adorno y le dan textura de inmensidad, al detallar sus diferentes formas, posición y altura relativa. Una vista de 360 grados, solo muestra el mismo paisaje que, por momentos, se convierte en monótono.
Allí, en medio de tanta inmensidad y después de girar sobre sí misma para detallar el paisaje y encontrar algo que lo haga distinto, Claudia nota algo que la perturba. Todo está perfectamente claro y brillante. Incluso, se siente una brisa fresca que permite diferenciar el tibio calor del ambiente. Pero, al tratar de ubicar la fuente de lo que sería usual para cualquier persona y en cualquier lugar, Claudia no puede ver ningún rastro del sol o algo que se le parezca. Después de percatarse de esto y mirar en todas direcciones buscando al astro rey, ella se pregunta: «¿Cómo puede ser esto posible?». Reflexiona rápidamente y decide cerrar los ojos, al asumir que está soñando. Se dice así misma que es un lugar hermoso, pero, sin la presencia del sol, no puede ser real. Divaga en su mente sobre estos pensamientos y aun con sus ojos cerrados, siente que se ha quedado dormida otra vez. Pero, al abrirlos de nuevo, su sorpresa es aún mayor.
Está acostada en su cama, de eso no tiene duda. Lo sabe porque en el techo puede ver claramente la lámpara que lo adorna, pero, con un color diferente. Levanta su cabeza levemente y a la derecha, puede ver con nitidez su peinadora, la silla junto a ella, su closet y todo lo que sabe ocupa su habitación. Pero hay algo inusual: todo es perfectamente blanco. Se recuesta en la cama y cierra de nuevo los ojos. Piensa para sí, que ya es hora de despertar y aprieta con fuerza los parpados. Luego de unos pocos instantes, abre de nuevo sus ojos y verifica que aún se encuentra en la misma blanca habitación, que es su propia habitación. Repite varias veces la misma acción, cerrar los ojos, pensar en dormir de nuevo o despertar de una vez y en cada ocasión, se encuentra siempre en el mismo lugar. Después de un último intento, donde incluso sintió claramente que se había dormido de nuevo, ella despierta y muy sorprendida, descubre que se encuentra en el mismo lugar.
Claudia se arma de valor y se sienta al borde de la cama. Nota que está vestida con su pijama adornada de elefantes y el piso de la habitación es el mismo de toda la vida. Todo está en su debido lugar, incluso hasta su laptop, pero con la intrigante característica de que todo es blanco. No hay nada que desentone con tanto blanco, más que el piso de la habitación, el color moreno de su piel y su pijama azulada y con elefantes de colores. Decidida, se dirige a la puerta de la habitación y la abre, Mira a través del pasillo donde, de nuevo, el blanco se impone sobre todas las superficies. Camina con rapidez en dirección a la habitación de sus padres, que se encuentra al inicio del pasillo. Pasa al frente de la habitación de su hermano, que está en mitad del camino, pero sigue avanzando hasta la puerta de la de sus padres ubicada, justo frente a la de su hermana. Con fuerza, toca la puerta y entonces, algo más que aterrador ocurre.
Claudia, en el momento que está tocando la puerta de sus padres, cae en cuenta de que no hay sonidos. De nuevo, golpea con sus puños la puerta y, aunque siente el fuerte golpe que asienta a la misma, no escucha nada. Entonces, grita con fuerzas llamando a sus padres mientras sigue golpeando y el pánico se apodera de ella. No hay ningún sonido. Nada sale de su garganta, aunque grita con gran desespero. Se abalanza contra la puerta con su cuerpo y aun así, nada perturba el profundo silencio mezclado con el intenso blanco. Toma la manilla de la puerta y comienza a moverla con energía para tratar de abrirla, pero esta parece ser, ahora, un elemento sólido en la misma. Aterrada por lo que le está ocurriendo, decide que debe regresar a su cama y volver a dormir. Pero, si todo esto no ha sido suficiente para hacerla desfallecer, lo que ve al final del pasillo, donde debería estar su habitación la deja impactada y en estado de shock.
Continuará...
Saludos, mis apreciados amigos de Hive Blockchain. Esta es la primera parte de una serie de tres capítulos que estaré escribiendo en esta comunidad y que se corresponde con él desafío para el mes de agosto ideado por @dreemport, con el apoyo de la comunidad Schoolar and Scribe y la plataforma @ecency. Se trata de una historia de ficción, cimentada en los requerimientos establecidos para dicho desafío y del cual me siento muy complacido de formar parte. Espero sea del agrado de todos y les invito a estar pendiente la próxima semana de la segunda entrega de esta serie.
ENGLISH VERSION
Claudia's Alternate Worlds - Chapter 1
A green meadow is shown in all its extensions, covered with a fine and very beautiful carpet of grass and couch grass that, it seems, takes care of itself. This, because its shape and beauty give the impression that it has been recently pruned or, somehow, has grown to the ideal point where they all seem to be at the same height, the exact and just so that none protrudes or is below another and each one in its ideal place, which generates a harmonious set of nature in perfect synchrony. Looking around and in the distance, you can only notice soft and delicate hills that go up and down, all perfect and all green. Above, a beautiful blue sky, furrowed by soft white clouds that serve as an ornament and give the texture of immensity, detailing their different shapes, position, and relative height. A 360-degree view shows only the same landscape that, at times, becomes monotonous.
There, in the midst of so much immensity and after turning in on herself to detail the landscape and find something that makes it different, Claudia notices something that disturbs her. Everything is perfectly clear and bright. There is even a cool breeze that allows her to differentiate the warmth of the environment. But, in trying to locate the source of what would be usual for anyone, anywhere, Claudia cannot see any trace of the sun or anything like it. After noticing this and looking in all directions for the sun, she wonders: «How can this be possible?». She reflects quickly and decides to close her eyes, assuming she is dreaming. She tells herself that it is a beautiful place, but, without the presence of the sun, it cannot be real. She wanders in her mind over these thoughts and even with her eyes closed, she feels like she has fallen asleep again. But, when she opens them again, her surprise is even greater.
She is lying on her bed, and of that, she has no doubt. She knows this because on the ceiling she can clearly see the lamp that adorns it, but with a different color. She lifts her head slightly and to the right, she can clearly see her hairdresser, the chair next to her, her closet and everything she knows occupies her room. But there is something unusual: everything is perfectly white. She lies down on the bed and closes her eyes again. She thinks to herself that it's time to wake up and squeezes her eyelids tightly shut. After a few moments, he opens his eyes again and verifies that he is still in the same white room, which is his own room. He repeats the same action several times, closing his eyes, thinking about sleeping again, or waking up all at once and each time, he always finds himself in the same place. After the last attempt, where she even felt clear that she had fallen asleep again, she woke up and very surprised, discovers that she is in the same place.
Claudia plucks up her courage and sits on the edge of the bed. She notices that she is dressed in her elephant-adorned pajamas and the floor of the room is the same as it has always been. Everything is in its proper place, even down to her laptop, but with the intriguing feature that everything is white. There is nothing that clashes with so much white, other than the floor of the room, the tan color of her skin, and her blue pajamas with colorful elephants. Determined, she walks to the door of the room and opens it. She looks across the hallway where, once again, white dominates every surface. She walks briskly in the direction of her parent's room, which is at the beginning of the hallway. He passes in front of his brother's room, which is in the middle of the path but continues to walk to the door of his parent's room, which is located directly opposite his sister's room. With force, he knocks on the door, and then, something more than terrifying happens.
Claudia, just as she is knocking on her parents' door, realizes that there is no sound. Again, she bangs her fists on the door and, although she feels the loud knock on the door, she hears nothing. Then, she screams loudly calling for her parents as she continues to pound and panic takes over. There is no sound. Nothing comes out of her throat, though she screams with great desperation. She lunges against the door with her body and yet nothing disturbs the deep silence mixed with the intense white. She grabs the door handle and begins to move it energetically to try to open it, but it now seems to be a solid element in the door. Terrified by what is happening to her, she decides that she must return to her bed and go back to sleep. But, if all this has not been enough to make her faint, what she sees at the end of the corridor, where her room should be, leaves her shocked and in a state of shock.
To be continued...
Greetings, my valued Hive Blockchain friends. This is the first part of a three-part series of chapters I will be writing in this community that corresponds to the challenge for the month of August devised by @dreemport, with the support of the Schoolar and Scribe community and the @ecency platform. It is a fiction story, based on the requirements established for the challenge and I am very pleased to be part of it. I hope you all enjoy it and I invite you to stay tuned next week for the second installment of this series.
Fuentes de las imagenes utilizadas / Sources of the images used:
PSD de Dormitorio creado por/Bedroom PSD created by Alexandercho en/in Freepik.es
Foto de campo verde creado por/Green field photo created by Wirestock en/in Freepik.es
Imagen de Fantasia/Fantasy Image by Stefan Keller en Pixabay
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Un excelente aporte ya que describes a la perfección el ambiente, el cual poco a poco parece volverse nada agradable para la joven. Estaré esperando la segunda parte para saber que vió. Muchísimo éxito @fragozar01 un abrazote.
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Nice build-up to the msytery, it could now be anything and interestingly I would want to find out if she is still in an extended dream. You created a vivid world which I tend to actually find very hard, looking forward to the next part. !PIZZA
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Nice entry dear keep it up ✅✅🙏
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Great story and I have no idea if she is in reality or a dream 😮
Oh heavens! I want to know what that is! And this seems like a paranormal adventure. Just to be clear... I keep seeing He and She, does this refer to two different people? Or is that a typo?
Loved your story!
I wonder if Claudia is a ghost???
I love the cover image by the way 🙌
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ahhhhh is she dead???
The beginning makes me think of Heaven! hehe because in Heaven there will be no sun.. only Christ is the light! hehehehe
then coming back and realizing everything is different but same?? hmmm hehehe I think death!
Let's see in part 2 - I'm going there now! heheh