Short Preview Of my New Book: Releasing 2022

Remember how I said I'm making a book hopefully to get published in 2022 as a birthday gift. I've decided before it's officially published I'll post several continuous chapters here so I can get a sort of feedback on it whether it needs improvement any problems or anything that anyone would like to share on the performance of the chapter it would be highly appreciated. Ok so the basic idea of the book is about a group of friends who have seemingly normal lives. The characters in this book are
A 15 Year old teenager named Max Gordon

Illustration by @zeraton

And his brother 13 Year old Dominic Gordon
(Illustration coming soon)

And Dominic's 14 Year old best friend Rachel White.

Other characters include Mr and Mrs Gordon And Mr And Mrs White(other characters will be mentioned later ). The book will be centered around Time travel and I will release the 1st chapter here for you guys to see tomorrow most likely. It may seem a little child like but I'm sure you will enjoy it and be able to understand. I'm really excited aren't you? Oh and the title will be released later. I hope you guys like it and Happy Holidays.

I hope you XL in Whatever You Do.