Tonight
this is the final straw
I can't take it anymore
all that's left in me is anger
regrets and despair
I can feel the world gazing at me
I feel the shame
I want it all to end tonight
I'm a falling star
fading into nothingness
to be forgotten
at least I burn out in glory
My light turned into darkness
no insight can make it right
I don't want to fight
I've given up already
my thoughts are filled with draughts
I've unlocked all the thoughts I have inside
I can't hold it in anymore
implode or explode
It doesn't matter
It ends tonight
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I think a little hope would have been nice in this poem, like the speaker's attitude is negative, it's like everything is done and finished for him/her, but it sure does show the feelings of the speaker very well.
Thanks for sharing.
implode or explode
It doesn't matter
It ends tonight
These last lines sound like the words a person says before they commit suicide😃.
Eitherways, I like the progression of the poem. It sounds like a person in distress. A person who is on the verge of giving up.
Yeah, you're right. It's what the poem was all about. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Thank you
It's always a pleasure 🤗✨