Through the Haze (original poetry)
(Edited)
Your smiles are hidden somewhere in your laugh,
like buried treasures I find on the path.
If I can't keep them, at least we can share-
these moments in which our souls are laid bare.
When I can see everything that is you-
and know it's a reflection of me too.
The timeless perfection of existence-
is revealed in the lack of resistance.
In the fog and haze, I see you clearer-
through the energy waves I feel mirrored.
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Excellent poem with a strong ending
nice colors, and words.
I like the pairing of verses via 2 sentences.
Yea I was really digging the colors that night... I don't normally take photos. Thanks for checking it out.
Pleasure, I've been getting back into poetry of late too.
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This is a beautiful description of intimacy, two people so in tune they become reflections of one another.
This gave me goosebumps ... Nice work of poetry here.
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Hey @clayboyn - this is pretty random but here goes.
Remember there was this contest you ran or were involved in a few years ago? It used like a funny quote generator, and then we voted on the best one. I can't remember the name or which site was used. All I know is you used to say "you are now RICh AF" when we won. It was my fav contest, and I'm keen on bringing it back! So if you remember the generator, that would be great - also, if you don't mind me wanting to bring it back. Any info you may have would be great! I searched, but I'm not finding anything!
https://inspirobot.me/
Doesn't look like it works anymore.
thanks for the quick reply! sucks, man. I was googling my ass off all of yesterday and didn't find anything that works as well. hence I asked. I'll have to think of another angle, then. I want to try and create a cool comp that is funny. Tired of these "comment and be randomly picked".
https://twitter.com/Clayboyn/status/1554541989844205568
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Really like how you paired "laugh" and "path," and "clearer" with "mirrored." Great poem and picture.