RE: Esp/Eng Mi más reciente batalla/My most recent battle

I read your article, and you use really long sentences. Like you wrote an entire paragraph 8 lines long as a single sentence! It's a common rule to use shorter sentences so your readers can easily follow your ideas.

Long sentences like you have here make people reach the end of the sentence without breath :)

https://www.writeraccess.com/blog/write-tight-6-tips-for-finding-the-perfect-sentence-length/